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| Good Head | |
| By Tenchi | ||||||||||||
| 13 November 2006 | ||||||||||||
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I've been doing emotionally charged stuff recently as seems to happen a lot when I get kicked in the heart by the opposite sex. I'm at work and thought I'd try something light. This is the result. Thank you for anyone that reviews anything I do. Your comments are always welcome and I only wits I could gt published, make millions and then spend any free time reading and reviewing other peoples work! I think winning the lottery is more likely though ![]() I tried, my love, I really did but you never gave me credit you wouldn’t listen, just flipped your lid or ignored me said ‘forget it’ When you wouldn’t talk it out you left me with no choice you’d never let me near about you’d seldom heed my voice The image of those tangled sheets burned hot in to my eyes I close them; see your forms replete after listening to your cries I’d stayed outside, until that point I’d listened near an hour rather than interrupt mid coit as another plucked your flower Neither he or you, did e'er espy me creeping to your side without giving chance to ask you why the blade it opened wide You listen now I talk to you I blame you not at all enfridged, enfrozen, slightly blue only now do you heed my call. I didn’t keep his head my dear that wouldn’t be ethically sound It's comforting your head's so near but I buried his in the ground
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