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JE SUIS MELOMANE

By JohnnyD

14 November 2006

This is the first poem I wrote in French about myself, while I was learning the language...

JE SUIS MELOMANE

JE SUIS SEUL DANS LA VIE
JE SUIS CELEBATAIRE
J'ADORE LA MUSIQUE BEAUCOUP
PARCEQUE JE SUIS MELOMANE

QUAND JE SUIS A LA MAISON
J'ECOUTE TOUJOUR LA MUSIQUE
J'ACHETE BEAUCOUP DE CASSETTES
PARCEQUE JE SUIS MELOMANE

IL Y A BEAUCOUP DE GENS
QUI DETESTENT LA MUSIQUE
JE ME SENS ILS ONT TRES BIZARRE
PARCEQUE JE SUIS MELOMANE

MA VIE EST COMME LA MUSIQUE
LA MUSIQUE EST COMME MA VIE
JE NE VIS PAS SAND MUSIQUE
PARCEQUE JE SUIS MELOMANE

Johnny D

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Hein, que'est ce que c'est?
Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 14th November 2006

Luckily it's very basic French, so I guess most people can understand this piece, but I'm not hoping it's going to be a trend to post pieces in languages other than English here (Although I would like to practice some).

It's a difficult challenge, to write poetry in a foreign language, but I'm affraid a little more practice is needed here. It's clear what you want to say, but only the first and the third part flowed well, and the content isn't very touching.

That said, I must say it's a brave attempt for someone who is still learning a language.

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