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MISS YOU...
By JohnnyD
14 November 2006
MISS YOU...

 

Aspirations? Wishes? Miracles?

Nothing can bring you back

To share my solitude

I miss you

Will always do so

Whenever I am all alone

 

Deep in my thoughts

I miss being with you

Miss your smile

I miss those warm hugs

The fragrance of your silky hair

Oh, my God! How I miss you?

 

A mile on my face

A shiver in my body

Remind me of those kisses

When your rosy pink lips

Explore my wanting lips

With sweet soft kisses

 

I nod to myself in disbelief

As I shake my right arm

Feeling you pulling my T-shirt

I hated when you did that

Now I miss then so much

Wish you could pull it again for me

 

Those long conversations

We shared for hours

Those stopping moments

Gazing in your eyes

As you talk endlessly

You know how much I miss them now

 

Lovely dinners, coffee breaks

Date aplenty with you nowhere

Like kids, I remember those loving fights

With mischief in your eyes

Those lovely smiles

Oh sweetie, I miss everything about you

 

Johnny D

1st November 2006

 

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Oh Dear -
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 14th November 2006
If you miss her so much, then there is only one thing to do - - - go after her again. We say: Nothing ventured, nothing gained (or regained). We look forward to the next episode of this story Johnny, and hope it has a happy ending. Waiting in anticipation - Josie

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