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Poetry
First Day
By luvccritters2
02 June 2005

written for a campfire on another site had to use the word stranded.


You left me, all alone, stranded

in a sea of sharks.

Me a mere cuddlefish trying in vain,

to blend in.

They sense my fear, I must reek of it.

They come closer, and closer still,

sufficating me

with their awesome power.  My breath escapes,

Coward! Come Back!

The lights the next to go.

I have escaped!

Breath returns releunctantly. I inhale deeply.

I open my eyes, slowly.

Why are they smiling?

What manner of mischief are they plotting?

You're new here arn't ya?

You play basketball?

Thus was my first day of school.

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Written by twriter (117 comments posted) 2nd June 2005
This is a lovely piece! 
 
Thank you luvccritters2 for posting this! 
 
TW

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