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Veils
By Fledermaus
16 November 2006
All this fuss about veils...

I never expected to see them in my hometown, eventhough its streets sometimes look like the United Nations' general assembly. Hats and turbans, kilts, fezzes and ponchos. They often ask me for the road to some street or building and I'm happy to show them the way. They are our guests and should have a pleasant time. Hopefully they will remember us as a helpful and friendly people.
Recently though, I spotted something strange, a scene I only know from television. Two women were walking down the shopping street, dressed in long black robes, with veils covering their faces. At first I smiled and thought they were the wives of one of those foreign visitors. The beautiful women of some sheik's harem. But than I noticed the one inconsistent thing. Underneath these long black robes I saw a pair of sneakers. Strange white and western shoes contrasting their exotic clothes. And then I guessed that these weren't foreign ladies, nor even devout and religious girls.
My town has a large Muslim community, and headscarfs are a common sight, but I never saw anyone wearing a veil before. So what makes these home-grown girls opt for this strange fashion? Their mothers aren't wearing them, their fathers do not tell them to and its certainly not the traditional costume of their ancestors' home.
Are they so devout? I doubt it. I've never seen a girl like that in front of the local mosque.
I think it's rather some sort of exhibitionism. Their clothes are shouting: "Look at me! Look and behold! Here I am! I do not listen to my father, I do not listen to my teacher. Are you shocked?"
Other girls dye their hair green, put piercings through their nose or wear skirts so short you can see their knickers. It seems just another fashion statement has been born. In the seventees hippies walked around naked to attract attention. Now they cover their entire body.

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Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 16th November 2006
The mini skirts.  
 
Yes you have a point. I don't think devoutness has anything to do with it. I believe there is no Islamic text that demands the wearing of the full bhoona. 
 
You're probably right. A perverse rebellion thing. "The more you say we shouldn't - the more we will". 
 
Thought provoking. 
 
Oli :)
Oh Dear.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 16th November 2006
My dear Mouse. I hear the fieldmouse is facing extinction. I would have to add having read this if ever a mouse signed its own death warrant it is before me writ large. The cat will not tolerate this. 
 
I am reminded of the warning come from the doyen of the Politically Correct Police, Polly Toynbee, Guardian Collumnist and Malign Assinine Twat. 
 
Whoever you are, 
Whatever you do, 
PC Polly is watching you 
 
Wherever you go,  
With or without trace, 
PC Polly is on your case.  
 
Take care Mouse. 
 
My advice is to confine your movements to B+Bs. And never give your National Insurance number. Remember, they caught Raskolnikov in the end. 
 
Slan!
Body Language
Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 16th November 2006
Skirts up to the bottom, blouses split to the waist, trousers, long dresses, masks and veils: We are told that they do not convey a message, but the truth is that they really do. I won't tell you what my fashion statement says - - but I'll leave you to guess. By the way, (and as words from a woman) - we wear what we wear not just to please "men" but mainly to please our female friends. They're the ones who say: "I like your coat/hat/dress etc Josie". The men just look and say nothing.
Thanks
Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 16th November 2006
Thanks Oli, Gerard and Josie. 
 
Oli, I once even saw a girl wearing a headscarf AND a miniskirt :grin  
 
Gerard, don't worry. I've never seen a cat weiring a veil, but I'll watch out for Polly ;)  
 
Josie, I think so indeed. Everyone's clothes tell something about him or her. And yes, men don't usually notice. Somehow girls are usually more surprised when I remark something about their clothes than when a girl does.

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