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Lewisa

By Talisker

17 November 2006

Kids don't think about trivialities like paying for things!

Her toddler trot became a gleeful gallop,
Lewisa! Lewisa! Put it back!
The furry, pink, hobby horse refused to stop,
So Lewisa gave her another crack
The shop and mother left behind,
Nothing to stop her now,
Free in space and time and mind,
As fast as little legs allow
She’s mine, she’s mine, she’s mine!

Oli 17/11/06

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Brilliant
Written by Garrulous (108 comments posted) 17th November 2006

You can just imagine the horror and embarrassment of the parent here and the determination of the toddler to make a clean getaway!

Very good, made me laugh.

Gar.

HOW DO YOU EXPLAIN -
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 17th November 2006

to little children about "money"? My little 2 year old grandaughter, Jessica, thinks that toys in shops are the same as toys in the playschool - and where does money come into all of this? What a shame that they have to be disillusioned. Well done, and you have shown good imagination with such a subject as this.

Written by ellipinnock (1784 comments posted) 17th November 2006

Hehehe, very good

Elli

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 17th November 2006

Enjoyed this very much Oli. Really caught the joy and imagination of the child in this.

All the best,

Phil.

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