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By Talisker
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20 November 2006 |
Another male contributor claimed to have had their sexual awakening at 14. Mine was much earlier - a bloody long time before I could do anything about it though!
Ah, such innocence... The Encyclopaedia Britannica,
A tampon leaflet,
An inquisitive ten year old boy
Primary school library
One finger in sex,
One in sewerage,
Just in case.
There I stand,
My little legs aquiver,
Face burning red
He puts what where?
No! When they lie… never!
And a pleasurable experience,
Oh dear, everyone’s looking.
Put the big book back.
Then there’s a little leaflet,
Mummy dropped at home,
With graphic instructions,
And a line drawing,
Of lady-bits!
How dirty I felt,
Guilty,
Sinful
How sweet,
And innocent,
Looking back
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Um....
Written by peeano1 (86 comments posted) 19th November 2006 | | Maybe something I wouldn't want to write about but it was very descriptive...Um, I really have nothing to comment any further..... |
Written by peeano1 (86 comments posted) 19th November 2006 | | Oh wait, watch out for spelling in the beginning... | Oh right enough...
Written by Talisker (1367 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | I just noticed from a forum comment that you are only 14 y/o Peeano.
Its all a bit fresh for you, this puberty lark. Give it 30 years and you'll find this funny/nostalgic. Maybe.
Oli
P.S. Can't find the spelling mistake!  |
Written by Garrulous (108 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | A nice idea - could relate to the sentiment of this but wasn't really drawn in by the writing. Could just be too early in the day though.
No spelling mistakes that I could see. | Sigh
Written by Fledermaus (4146 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | | You're a wonderful poet Oli, but every now and then something puerile appears. Back to more serious poetry? |
Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 20th November 2006 |
Actually, I'm not sure that either of my two could spell encyclopedia in either dialect. Though I think they do know what it means. . .
Speaking of encyclopedias, they did supply handy knowledge that my sisters and I failed to gain from ripping the underwear off a neighbor's Ken doll (we were deprived kids without Barbies or their cohorts).
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Written by Talisker (1367 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | Wrong on all counts Batty.
(1) I'm not a wonderful poet
(2) This is neither trivial (to me) nor childish (what child would write such a thing?) Perhaps ill conceived, I'll give you that.
(3) Serious poetry! Great Moses on a skateboard! You couldn't make it up!
Oli  |
Written by ellipinnock (1816 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | Cor, Moses is getting around a bit on this site of late, albeit in a very carbon-friendly manner.
Who said that poetry had to be serious anyway? Didn't think it was trivial or childish either. I quite liked it in fact, not your your best but still better than most 
Elli | Words...
Written by Fledermaus (4146 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | Puerile was the wrong word. I meant something like teenage-like, rebellious, etc, but I forgot what the correct word was
Never mind. | Memories
Written by Sophie1 (12 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | This brought back memories. I too, recall looking up certain words that I had heard around the playground, scared that an adult might find out what I was doing.
The poem was quirky and hit a personal note with me. |
Written by Phil (8698 comments posted) 20th November 2006 | Liked this Oli. Kids still do it now. 'Sex' is the most well thumbed page in the school dictionaries etc.
'Lady-bits' - Lovely.
All the best,
Phil. |
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