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WHEN LOVERS MEET
By JohnnyD
20 November 2006
WHEN LOVERS MEET

Emotions overflow as they embrace
Lips get locked, hands explore
Fragrance of love spreads its essence
When lovers meet

Crossing the limitless boundary
Each single touch raises a new feeling
Bursting out like a volcano
The hearts beat passionately

Tresses arouse the desire within
As eyes shut their eyelids
In anticipation to feel the tinge
As lips explore every inch


Pain surpasses the heights
Lifting the lovers in ecstasy
The smile on the face says it all
As tears roll down the eyes

Words fail to express
As eyes engage in conversation
Content, the body and mind
Speak the meeting of the lovers

Moment stops to eternity
As feelings overflow
Stings with sweetness
The tingling sensation lingers...


Johnny D
17th November 2006

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Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 20th November 2006
Well, you made clear what this is about without mentioning the subject... I must say I liked the first three stanzas best though, since the other three are more about something else than love.
All this bottled up love - - -
Written by Josie (2780 comments posted) 20th November 2006
Have you met Miss Right yet Johnny?

Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 20th November 2006
Johnny - I can't say I rate your poem as one of the best I've read on this site. However, I'm pleased that at last you seem to have written something without the temptation to preach at the reader. For that, well done. You'll get more readers and constructive criticism for it. 
 
Phil.

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