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Missing You, Still
By Evangeline
05 June 2005
Our last talk was a long time ago
Seems like yesterday

Wishing, won't make it tomorrow
So I could add the stuff I left out

You had such big plans
Things to do
Places to go

I remember your eyes
dancing with a blue fire

And, how your dimples deepened
when you were being mischievous

I know for a fact that you would not have hurt a fly....
Yet, You would have wrestled any one of us to the ground
Just for a laugh

Cousin, it's been twenty years
And, I miss you still

Reviews
Emotive...
Written by richard (88 comments posted) 6th June 2005
Very emotive piece - gives a real sense of loss and shows how we remember specifics about a person. 
 
Richard
sombre and nostalgic
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 6th June 2005
liked it
missing you still
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 8th June 2005
memorys hey? 
good piece 
 
bernie
There are certain things ...
Written by johniebg (541 comments posted) 9th September 2006
... that remind us of those we loved that now only grace our memories, this is one of them. Hit the spot, grandad paid me a visit when I read 'its been twenty years' and thats the true power of writing.

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