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The Baby in the Box .
By patterjack
23 November 2006
The Baby in the Box .

My daughter's father-in-law was a most accomplished man in the practical sense . I have a great admiration for him , even though we were poles apart in our respective political and cultural views . To list all that he achieved would be a novel in itself , but the most significant one for this account was the building of a steel-hulled catamaran , Warriuka which was well over thirty feet long and beautifully fitted out ; an eight berth dream boat .

It was built in his backyard , at the top of a steep hill in Wollongong !

His greatest ambition was , on retirement , to sail the Barrier Reef from a base at Airlie Beach on the Whitsunday Passage . After a couple of preview trips he was ready to retire , and then disaster struck . As he crossed a busy road on a wet night he was struck by a car and badly injured , an injury which rendered his right arm useless , and which , in the end , necessitated its entire removal .

With dogged determination , he transferred his skills to his left hand , but it is not feasible to sail a large boat with the use of only one arm . He therefore employed various people as pick up crews , and it was soon after the birth of Vanessa's first boy , Garth , that she , Bruce and I became his crew on one trip .

Now , my wife and I had spent a fortnight with him and another companion sailing the Whitsundays a year or so before , but this was to be a longer sojourn on the boat . Bruce was the main crewman , his father helmsman and navigator , Vanessa took her turn at the helm now and then , and I was chief cook and bottle washer , with the odd stint at helping on other sailorly tasks .

But to the point of this tale .

Bruce , Vanessa and I hired a car and drove to Queensland along the New England Highway , and then partly through the backblocks of Queensland around to Airlie -- a saga in itself for me and worthy of another later posting . Partly because it was a hired car , and partly because Garth was only a small baby , we did not have a suitable car crib to carry him .

I therefore wandered up to a shop near where the couple were living and made some enquiries . I was able to obtain several different sized cartons of different strengths and qualities , and after a little cutting , reinforcing and other ploys , I constructed a sort of temporary crib into which we could fit the sprog.

Actually explaining why I wanted particular types of box caused great hilarity among the shopkeepers .

He got used to his sleeping place quite quickly , and when the days of travel began , he was quite content to sleep in his box , which was firmly strapped in with seat belts of course , with his mother beside him in the back while Bruce and I drove. Vanessa insisted on doing a bit of driving as well , for short distances , and I would then take a turn to sit in the back accompanying young Moses in cardboard . He was a remarkably well behaved child .

It was always a laugh when we stopped , to notice the expressions on passers by who seemed amused , surprised , and even concerned , to see a baby sleeping peacefully in a cardboard box.

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Written by Snodlander (507 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
We did something similar with our first, except that we used her carry cot. It was what she was used to sleeping in. In fact, on some nights when her screaming became too much, I would take her carry cot into the car and run the engine for half an hour until she fell asleep. Not sure whether it was the vibration or the carbon monoxide. 
 
If you are using cardboard boxes, be careful with the bubblewrap.
"Ship Called Dignity""
Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
The bit about you're daughter's father-in-law reminds me of the Deacon Blue song.  
 
Anyway, Great Moses in a Cardboard Box!  
 
Fab story! Enjoyed! 
 
Good stuff for taking the mind of the ashes series. Tranny radio under the pillow all night, and for what??? 
 
Oli :?

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3458 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
You're a natural story-teller; it must be all those years lecturing. I lolve the way you fit stories within stories 
They do say there is no such thing as a boring story only a boring writer and I'm sure you could make an interesting and engaging story out of anything with your ability 
I envy you  
J  
P.S email to follow soon

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
My parents always gleefully inform me that the only way they could get me to sleep through the night at one point was to put me in with the washing machine and turn it on :) 
 
As Oli says, 'Fab story!' 
 
E :)

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
I remember reading in a parenting book years ago (I think it was Sheila Kitzinger's 'The Crying Baby' which I bought because of being the proud new caretaker of a crying baby myself), that a good percentage of the kerb crawlers you saw at night might well be fathers with colicky babies in the back of their cars. A ride in the car certainly worked for our baby, as did any movement. I never stopped moving for the first eight months of her life . . .  
 
Once again, an interesting read.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
I meant in the same room as the washing machine...not actually in it :) Although that might explain a lot. 
 
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In a spin
Written by patterjack (1343 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
I have heard of oher uses for a vibrating washing machine as well , Elli . I shall now think of you as a bit of a whirly-bird 
 
Thank you all for the kind words. 
 
That trip settled things for the grandson --for some years , no sooner was he put in a car than he fell asleep. Pavlov strikes ? 
 
His young brother was never any trouble either , ( especially if given a series of cheese sandwiches ) but stayed awake for a length of time beyond belief !  
 
If I can find some rather meagre diaries that at least recorded where we went , I may be able to rustle up some more about the Reef. 
 
patterjack  
 

Written by Phil (6851 comments posted) 23rd November 2006
Babies in cars seems to be the thing. My youngest would sleep for hours in a moving car but just howled constantly anywhere else. 
 
Good piece Brian. I enjoyed it. Life after Dondingalong after all. 
 
Keep them coming. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

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