READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1636 guests online and 9 members online
Poetry
RAINBOW
By JohnnyD
24 November 2006
  RAINBOW
 
Splendour, colours, grandeur

Bound by invisible brightness

Trickling dews, colourful hues

Horizon lit up with unusual theme

 
A cheer spreads all around

Happiness abounds, children thrilled

Heart jumps in joys with ecstasy

As contentment spreads its horizon

 
The bright rays kiss the sky

Embracing it colourfully

As they meet invisibly

The world witness in joy


Johnny D
24th November 2006

Reviews

Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 24th November 2006
Again, I applaud your restraint. You're really getting the hang of it now.  
 
Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 24th November 2006
As with Phil, it's nice to see you being a it more subtle! Still found this a bit trite, I'd have liked more in the way of content. but definitely better than some of your other pieces.  
 
Elli

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item