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By Tenchi

24 November 2006

5 minute at work effort

First attempt in non-rhyming poetry for a long while.

Dunno what's with the 'crazeeeee' formatting though.

Hope all are well.

I poise above

woman perfected

Taste the intimate

Feel your ideal form

Warmth emitted

from your skin

Your scent

Hope it lasts forever

Feel the closeness

of heaven

Imminent bliss

beckoning me on

Liking the curves

of femininity

Pools of Hazel Green

saying dive on in

Love and

warmth and

sex and

wanting

Reviews

Profound
Written by Garrulous (108 comments posted) 24th November 2006

But strangely I liked it - except for the dodgy formatting.

Gar. :grin

Curve appreciation
Written by Sophie1 (12 comments posted) 24th November 2006

It's good to know there's still an appreciation for curves!

On a serious note, I loved the poem's content but have to agree with Garrulous on the formatting.

Written by Phil (8763 comments posted) 24th November 2006

Liked this, but the first two verses had much more to offer than the last two. Not in content, but delivery.

All the best,

Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1816 comments posted) 24th November 2006

Good starting point but it does feel a bit like a five minute effort! Definitely worth sitting on for a bit and polising though because there's some good stuff in there.

E

Smut!
Written by Talisker (1367 comments posted) 25th November 2006

This is just a lot of filthly words masquerading as a poem.

I suggest a very cold shower, then try again!

Oli

Written by Marybarry (237 comments posted) 12th February 2007

M.B.

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