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Arms of the Angel
By Storywriter1987
25 November 2006
I hope you enjoy this. I have been singing the Sarah McLachan version of 'Arms of the Angel' and it inspired me to write this.

Enjoy

Spend all your time waiting for that second chance
for the break that will make it ok
There's always some reason to feel not good enough
And it's hard at the end of the day


I need some distraction, oh beautiful release
Memories seep from my veins
They may be empty and weightless, and maybe
I'll find some peace tonight

In the arms of an Angel, fly away from here
From this dark, cold hotel room, and the endlessness that you fear
You are pulled from the wreckage of your silent reverie
You're in the arms of an Angel; may you find some comfort here

So tired of the straight line, and everywhere you turn
There's vultures and thieves at your back
The storm keeps on twisting, you keep on building the lies
That you make up for all that you lack


It don't make no difference, escaping one last time
It's easier to believe
In this sweet madness, oh this glorious sadness
That brings me to my knees

In the arms of an Angel, far away from here
From this dark, cold hotel room, and the endlessness that you fear
You are pulled from the wreckage of your silent reverie
In the arms of an Angel; may you find some comfort here.
You’re in the arms of the angel, may you find some comfort here.’


I sat back and watched the guys – My guys, in a way, singing that song and it reduced me to tears! Then their work was over for the day and that they could all go home. Dominic came towards me saw me crying and held me close to him and stroked my hair softly. That song had a real effect on me, ever since the first time I heard it! It had meant so much to me and after I was told it was sung with us girls in mind – us girls being me, Ella, Rose and Rachael! – We all went to our separate homes and I sat, in silence, in the arms of my angel! Then my beloved said…

“Marry me?”
“WHAT!”
“Hun, you know I love you and we’ve been together for 5 years! I have to have you in my life forever! Please marry me!”
“Yes!”
“WHAT!”
“Yes I will!
“Really! You mean I’ll have you in my life forever?”
“Forever and a day if you want me! Do you want me?”
“Well, I’ll have the think about that!........ Um…. YES!”

That night ended up with us getting involved in a major tickling fight! One time I almost fell off the sofa, but he caught me just in time and I was safe, out of breath but safe. We decided to call it a night and went upstairs to bed and there again I lay contently in his arms! Then a thought hit me…

“Dom, do you remember what we did 3 months ago?”
“Yes, I do. And I loved you even then.”
“I should hope so!”
“What about it darling?”
“Well, it worked!”
“What do you mean ‘it worked’?”
“I mean it worked!”
“I still don’t get it!”
“Dom, I’m pregnant!”
“REALLY?”
“Yes, I am. Do you not want it then?”
“I….um… Of course… I do… um…”
“You don’t’ want it then, you would know if you did!”

I got up and out of bed and locked myself in the bathroom, morning sickness chose this time to pop up so at least I was in the right place!

A few months later and I was getting a bump, and quite a large one too. Dom was loving it, he took care of me. Just like he always had. I remember it so very well…. it was my 19th           birthday….

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Reviews

Written by LynB (433 comments posted) 4th December 2006
This is really good, Clare. I love the way you've set the scene for the story, leaving the reader wanting more. You give a good insight into the characters' personalities, so I feel I know them. The dialogue is good, too - very believable. An excellent start - look forward to reading the next chapter. 
 
By the way, thanks for the birthday message - I loved it!! :grin

Written by Storywriter1987 (91 comments posted) 4th December 2006
Any time Lyn.  
 
I thought you might like it! 
I still play it now! lol! 
 
Glad you liked it. 
 
I hope to have the next bit up on thursday night.  
 

Written by Glynis (103 comments posted) 15th December 2006
Hi Clare, I have only just come across this new peice of writing. :roll I love the opening sentences, I have been looking for this peice as I read chapter2 and was flumoxed, but now it all makes perfect sense. Lol.  
 
Is Dominic based on 'Someone Very Special'?

Written by Storywriter1987 (91 comments posted) 15th December 2006
Hi Glynis. 
 
The character of 'Dom' IS based on someon special to me and there are bits of him that my 'brother' - BEST friends man helped me to write. Glad you liked it. Glad it all makes sense now.  
 
:lol:  
 
Chapter 3 is going up soon. I'm just putting the finihing touches to it. 
 
Thanks again. 
 
CC.

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