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Poetry
Pigs
By Talisker
26 November 2006
A pig cannot look at the sky,
Nor bend his neck to even try,
Because of porcine physiognomy,
Very few take up astronomy.


Oli 26/11/06

Reviews

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 26th November 2006
Have you been reading Spike Mulligan Oli? I knew something else was on the way. A perfect bit of nonsense. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.
Great!
Written by Fledermaus (3237 comments posted) 26th November 2006
For lines about (I agree with Phil) absolute nonsense. But it made me laugh, and I think it was great.

Written by Phil (6635 comments posted) 26th November 2006
Sorry Oli, when I say 'a perfect bit of nonsense,' I mean it was, as F says, great. 
 
Phil.

Written by wattle (117 comments posted) 26th November 2006
I’m thinking I have an issue here. I'm sure many pigs lie on their backs and star gaze; the well fed ones. -- Thank you --- regards, wattle

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 27th November 2006
physiognomy-the art of face interpretation?! Nice typo (I'm assuming it's a typo, I'll look very silly if it ain't :)
Very nice Oli. 
 
E

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 27th November 2006
Well you learn something new every day :) 
 
*retires sheepishly* 
 
:grin

Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 27th November 2006
You have a talent for making me (and it seems several others) laugh out loud. Thanks Oli :grin

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 29th November 2006
cute poem! :grin made me laugh.
Pigs
Written by TheWackyWordsmith (12 comments posted) 24th November 2007
Aha! 
A writer after my own heart!!  
 
I love writing this kind of ztuff - it's great fun but only for those with a sense of humour. 
 
Will drop some of my nonsense in this weekend. 
 
Keep your pencil sharp! :grin  
 
Love it!

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