my first piece of work, probably not poetry, so please go easy. i wrote this after a night out with a friend i'm love with, but she does'nt love me, ouch!!

(this is a revised edition of my poem, with a couple of small changes, i'd like to say thanks again for the comments posted below, i look forward to reading some of your
work and getting started on my next piece, thank you all.)

Here i stand in the darkness
On the edge of a despair
Consumed with pain and sorrow
Alone with no hope

Why has my life become this way
With no-one to stand by me
To breathe life into my heart
And protect me from harm

Where is my saviour

Where are you my love.