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| By JourneyAtNight | ||||||||||
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Just wrote this, it still needs work. Attack as you please! x Frustration boiling with the pressure of his words tipping her cover as guilt overflows she is unable to reiterate what he left there... left lingering there. Those wretched words slowly tearing that perfect picture to pieces, her work of art. Friendship defaced. Anger grows and divides towards Him for a selfish confession ignorantly spoken. Leaving her with a big black weight to carry on her back. and towards herself - Her own blind and tactless ways, too many smiles too much eyelash. And now only awkward silences and indecisive eyes remain to increase the pain, the presence of a threadbare bond.
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