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By chocomallow
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28 November 2006 |
Silently I walk with the ice-cold wind Biting my skin like vampires embrace flesh I begin to question myself Manic voices kick in To the quiet bangs of my heart Brains huddle together Too frozen for rational thoughts Ignoring the world In silence I walk on
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Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 28th November 2006 | Sorry this could entirely be my stupidity. PLease forgive if that's the case. Got a bit lost half way through this. You're alone. 'Brains' - plural. Are these the brains that belong to the voices you hear. But then all the voices, different personalities maybe, but the voices themselves come from the same brain - or not? Is this just about being cold, or more? I read it as if it was - almost - but then changed my mind. Too dense Phil. | Written by Talisker (1321 comments posted) 29th November 2006 | How many brains have you? Less than one I'll wager! Too frozen? If you are cryogenically disadvantaged then you will be dead young person, too cold perhaps, not too frozen surely! Not dense Phil! There is no hidden message here - just an ill considered group of words. Try,try again! Oli
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