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Personal Address to S. T. Coleridge , Esq.
By patterjack
29 November 2006
Personal Address to S. T. Coleridge , Esq.

There are those among us , Samuel , who deplore

your leaving your desk to answer, at your door ,

that Person from Porlock : one still to us unknown ,

who broke your thought with business of his own.

He held you there , as did the Ancient Mariner

Hold firm the Wedding Guest , unwilling listener .

Under a mundane spell of business to be done

he broke the web of fantasy you had spun ;

he was the albatross keeping you at his beck

for an hour at least , till you dropped from your neck

that Person from Porlock who had , by simple chance ,

woken you from your desk - bound opium trance.

And so the vision that had within you burned

to the deep subconscious well of thought returned ,

unfinished till your memory could restore

that maiden's voice whose singing promised more

than fragments of thought , just like the hail rebounding

through Kubla's caverns , sounding and resounding,

to regain the logic of the shattered story

to celebrate again that wondrous glory .

You clutched ... but with only small conviction--

at something that might bolster its prediction

of Kubla's voices prophesying war--

So you called this work a fragment , nothing more .

Then over the years came the struggle to devise

the work to a fuller , broader epic you'd revise .

but abandoned to publish at the enthused behest

of a lordly poet ; command more than request .

Could you not face it , Sam , that splendid vision

complete within itself , told with precision ?

But thinking of unjust critics' accusations

felt it needed some further explanations ?

Thank the Muse , dear Sam , you let it be

Leaving us with a poem about pure poetry.

Reviews
Poet.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 29th November 2006
Exquisite erudition, Brian. And so witty. So utterly different from the delusions of Megaphone Man. Mind you what a shock you'd get if Colerige replied! 
 
Beautiful. 
 
Slan!
Lovely!
Written by Talisker (1328 comments posted) 29th November 2006
Nice to see you back in the muse yourself, Brian. 
 
I'll need to read more STC. 
 
Megaphone Man.

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 29th November 2006
Now I'm going to have to go out and read 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner' again. And I struggled enough the first time. . . 
 
It is nice to have something in the poetry section that challenges our intelligence (it doesn't take much, in my own case) and pushes us to go out and read more poetry -- or for that matter, to read about poets. From what I remember about Coleridge, he would have been pretty shocked over poetry nowadays.  
 
I've always wondered what his work would have been like if he had not been addicted to opium. Do we owe Kubla Khan to his addiction? 
 
I'll get back to you on this after I've found the hour to re-read 'Kubla Khan' and 'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner' (Hope no one points out that I've misspelled 'rhyme.')  
 
Still, I enjoyed this!
The wife of Kubla Khan.
Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 29th November 2006
My old man is the Kubla Khan 
As built the sodding pleasure dome. 
His mates tell me its bleeding nice, 
All sunshiny with caves of ice. 
I’m on my fucking way to see  
What keeps him in that shitty dome, 
He’s never back in time for tea, 
What’s better than he’s got at home? 
It’s fucking freezing as the waves 
Rush past a spout, through icy caves. 
I tell you, if he’s sunk in sin 
I’ve brought my ruddy rolling pin. 

Written by Phil (6828 comments posted) 29th November 2006
STC - the first classic poet I really enjoyed - I was probably a late developer. His collection is one of the too few poetry books I own.  
 
Enjoyed this Brian. Interesting what Witzl wrote. Did he write much of his work as a result of being stoned, or despite being stoned? Not sure it really matters, there was talent and depth there aplenty - interesting nevertheless. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil. 
 
Reviewers All !
Written by patterjack (1314 comments posted) 29th November 2006
I salute you in return. 
 
First : Phil and Witzl -- somewhere in my dappled Alzheimered memory I believe I heard that STC had been a whiskey addict , and had tried to cure himself by taking laudanum and finishing up being trapped by both -- but that may have been de Quincey . Whatever, STC was certainly an opium addict and the story of The Person from Porlock , perhaps a lie , is one of the great stories in critical writing. 
 
Thank you Gerard and Oli -- this verse was a hard slog -- and took a long stime to develop by accretion -- finishing up a bit like a lumpy stalagmite . 
 
Songster-- hardly a review ? Why not put it under comic verse? 
 
But thanks to all and sundry anyway ! 
 
paterjack 

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