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| THE LONG WAIT | |
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THE LONG WAIT The sound of the second’s hand Beating like the drums Getting louder n louder As patience is pitied against promise Walking up n down Looking at the watch The growing impatience Brings in various unpleasant thoughts It’s the curse words Keeping company for a while As time is ticking Marching ahead all the time Network jams the call As fingers punch the numbers on the cell Much to dislike n discomfort Engage tone irritates to death She doesn’t arrive As he gets wild Time laughs aloud Mocking the promise of the two Tired of walking up n down He sits on the stone Holding his head in disbelief Minutes change into hours Praying, wishing everything good He folds his hands in despair As meeting turns into a long wait Rendezvous turns into a nightmare Laughing, enjoying without the two The world seems so callous Promises broken, she never arrives Oh, what a long wait it was! Johnny D 29th November 2006
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