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| The Tank to the Ocean | |
| By shakermaker | ||||
| 29 November 2006 | ||||
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Needs working on I think, but the idea's there... I lived in a fishtank Never dreamt of the ocean It was safer that way In the shallow depths I was bold and swam freely Bowed down to no one In time I got brave And dived in the nets Call it Harri Karri Perhaps it's devotion But needless to say I came under threat Not that I wavered; The big fish are stubborn The wee fish are slaves, But each owe a debt Haunted by fake castles, Friends; the same colours, And grim, murky graves I'm not free just yet
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