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Why Why Why
By horror4lover
29 November 2006
Why is the sky blue
Why is grass green
Why is it called wood

i dont get it
why is numbers the way they are
why do we speak in different toung
why do we speak at all

i dont get it
why should there be life
why should there be wind
why should there be anything


now i realy dont get it!

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Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 29th November 2006
interesting concept... :grin I have a poem like that, as well... minor correction on the second verse, different tounges. 
and, of course, speaking in the lines of Phil, "the lack of punctuation and correct capitalization does grate a bit". But of course, just a comment. I don't do it, either! 
 
cheers, 
rilLie
A lot of questions
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 30th November 2006
You sound like a 3 yr old - are you? ha ha. They always ask questions which are impossible to answer. Please, please, add your punctuation, and capitals and check your spelling. These little things are ruining what would otherwise be good work. "tongues". The other important thing is the use of the apostrophe: http://www.apostrophe.fsnet.co.uk/ It is so easy to learn.
Has all been said above!
Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 30th November 2006
Atrocious lack of correct grammar and punctuation, a 3 year old's philosophy, good God are you for serious? 
 
Oli :?

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