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Poetry
Time Time
By horror4lover
30 November 2006
Time,
time,
what is time,
time,
time,
i dont get time,
time,
time,
comon what is it,
all i think it is,
is that,
we are getting older,
and older,
by the second.
No way to stop it,
no way to turn it back,
no way to move forward.
So you will never,
ever,
know what comes,
as time passes by,
what will happen.
How do we know,
what to do,
how to do it,
or if we can,
stop it.
Time,
time.

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Written by Phil (6838 comments posted) 30th November 2006
Spelling better - good. 
 
You need to explore your subject matter more. Time is a great thing to write about but this says nothing new in an old way. 
 
Don't get despondent - genuinely trying to help you. 
 
Phil.

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