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Love me do

By woody44

30 November 2006

She had only one leg on which to stand
When she met a man from a famous band
They got on famously and soon were wed
But all was not well so the pressmen said
Land mines and seals all done with a smile
No one would guess the extent of her guile
Then it was over the acrimony rife
He tight-lipped she the much-wronged wife
How it will end no one is sure
This tale of the girl with a fatal flaw

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Written by horror4lover (14 comments posted) 30th November 2006

not being horrible but hat makes no sence?????????

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 30th November 2006

Woody, your hat makes sense to me. That is, if you are wearing one. And if you're not, I still think your poem is funny.

Maybe she'd have loved him more
If they'd both been sixty-four . . .

money, money, money....
Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 30th November 2006

Thanks Witzl. Yes you`ve got a point re the ages, although somehow I don`t think, in this instance, it would have made a great deal of difference.

Sorry you didn`t get it Joe..Perhaps the main protagonists are a little old for your tender years...and I don`t mean that in a patronising way!

happy writing
Woody

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 30th November 2006

teehee...very droll. I liked it very much

It's nice to see you pootling around poetry we could do with an injection of sense.

Elli

Thanks.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 1st December 2006

Woody, you ol' Slyboots! What you doing here, so far from home? Mind, its good to catch an injection of understated humour. Christ knows, as Ellie hints, this forum could bo with it. Tickling piece. Made me smile for a difference. Thanks for that.

Slan!

I think I got lost...
Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 2nd December 2006

Thanks Gerard. I think I strayed onto here by mistake. I must admit to not taking poetry too seriously, far to much pretentious waffle about for my liking (not here of course!)

happy writing
Woody

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