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Is it a lie
By horror4lover
30 November 2006
just something that came into my head.

Heaven ,
is it a loverly place,
is it like they say,
do all your dreams come true
or is it all a lie.
Hell,
is it a dredfull place
is it like they say,
do all your nightmares come true
or is it all a lie.

Heaven,
clouds floating in the sky,
is it like they say,
do all your dreams come true
or is it all a lie.
Hell,
fire pouring out of the ground,
is it like they say,
do all your nightmares come true
or is it all a lie.

God,
is he realy the ruler of the earth,
is it like the say,
does he grant you your prayers
or is it all a lie.
Devil,
is he realy the ruler or the firey flames of hell
is it like they say,
makes all your worst fears come true
or is it all a lie.

God,
could he destroy us,
is it like they say,
makes all your worst fears come true
or is it all a lie

Devil,
was he realy an agel that fell out of the sky,
is it like they say,
makes all your worst fears come true
or is it a lie.



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Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 30th November 2006
I've read a few of your pieces now and I think you'd be wise to take Phil's advice. Post less, make sure you spell check before you post and genuinely think about what you want to say because at the moment you often seem to run out of ideas and just let the piece peter out. Fewer posts will also receive more attention in terms of reviews as will posts with better spelling etc. 
 
Elli

Written by Phil (6738 comments posted) 30th November 2006
Sorry to sound repetitive H4L, but read and heed Elli's advice. 
 
Phil.

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