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Betray
By DarkRoseMistress
01 December 2006
The best of my friends has just ran away, this bitter emotion I call 'betray'.Cry

Betray

By Dark Rose Mistress

We were the best of friends that same day

Laughing and smiling but he betray

Our circle of friendship and ran away

It was uneventful, such was a day



No more were the smile etched in my face

It was heart wrenching, this kind of phase

He abandoned me here along with dismay

With bitter remnants, this I called betray


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