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Cruithne
By Fledermaus
01 December 2006
A little bit in a reaction to Oli's 'Arbroath', just to tease him, as the Scots weren't so innocent themselves either ;)

Furthermore inspired by Clannad's "Newgrange", eventhough that doesn't have anything to do with the Picts, yet the line "Heroic kings lay down to rest, forgotten is the race that no one knows", seem suitable...

In the north of a rainy island
Was a country fair and green
The Cruithne settled on its sand
And raised stones, as can be seen

They kept the Romans off their turf
And struck fear in Britons' heart
The Gael appeared from yonder surf
And of this land they claimed their part

From the south the Angles came
Remembered in Gododdin's song
Lothian warriors then fought for fame
On Catraeth's field, so hard and long

Fortiu taken by brave Highland men
On its remains a new nation arose
And Alba's first ruler was king Ken
Of whom is told in poetry and prose

And thus ended the Pictish story
In the field a rock, ancient, alone
A memorial of battle and of glory
Of forgotten men who raised this stone

Reviews
Excellent, I would say
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 1st December 2006
Yes, eye-catching title. It is a lovely bit of history written in an interesting way. They worshipped Mother Earth, the lady in my poem: "Mother Earth's Payback Time". They were the first settlers in Britain and I hope Mother Earth's payback doesn't mean that we are the last ones. I see that they were the original settlers in Albany too. I take my hat off to your poem which must have been quite difficult to write. Well done Fledermaus!

Written by Fledermaus (3306 comments posted) 1st December 2006
Thanks Josie. 
Indeed an interesting similarity in those names, Alba and Albany. I don't know if there's realy a connection, but at least according to mythology there is one. According to wikipedia it has something to do with an ancient word for the colour white...

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 1st December 2006
You're a brave man! 'king ken' tickled me :) Interesting stuff 
 
Elli

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 1st December 2006
See - the historical writer. 
 
Interesting verse. Can't follow all this nationalism stuff. Aren't all the Brits a bastard breed of whoever has visited these islands over the last several thousand years. Isn't what's left just relatively recent tradition and accent? (and a few well maintained grudges) 
All the best, 
 
Phil.
Scotland
Written by Fledermaus (3306 comments posted) 2nd December 2006
Thanks Elli and Phil. 
Elli - Brave? I'm curious if Oli'll spot it and reply in satire :grin 
Kenneth mac Alpin didn't fit in, so he became king Ken... Wonder where Barbie is. 
 
Phil - You're probably right. Who knows? Only DNA research could answer that question, but until then I agree.  
But, eventhough I like Scottish culture and their heroic past, it always strikes me that they associate themselves with this Highland culture, which never was the civilization of the whole of Scotland. 
Furthermore the English are often (correctly) blamed for the downfall of Scottish Gaelic, while the Scottish Gaels themselves are responsible for the downfall of Pictish and northern Brythonic. There's no nation in the world which is completely innocent.

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