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High works
By sueas
01 December 2006
Please use alternative authors if preferred. Some exaggeration too
May have mixed up the message here - comments welcome.

Read Milton and Shakespeare
I’ve studied so hard
But I couldn’t make sense
Of the words from the Bard
 
They had to translate it
It didn’t make sense.
I’d expect that if written
In Urdhu or French
 
Then Austen and Bronte
So much clearer by far
Here there are stories
Of characters who are
 
Nearer to human
More local to me and those
Written in time
When more knew  ABC
 
But what about Hardy
Where one leaf on a tree
Took such years of description
It took fifty three
 
Pages of words
Which when read were too thin
With a measure of mass
Couldn’t hold,
draw me in
 
Then I read Britain and
Virginia, Ms Wolf
And I began to realise,
To consider the gulf
 
Between those who had written
And those who had not
For whom they were writing
For those who had got
 
Status and privilege
Money for school
The elite and the classes
Not mixed in the pool
 
Of poor – those ignorant
But not any more
They’re all reading and writing
And settling the score
 
Written at a time
Within context for sure
High language for learneds
But now there are more
 
 
Readers and writers
Evolving with time?
Now we all read
Now a quagmire
 
Swamped with a drivel
That everyone can read?
Tomes writ by Beckham
Roo, Clarkson, Trinny
 
New words on the page
Do I better understand?
The point or the purpose,
In time – will they stand?

Reviews
True
Written by Fledermaus (3306 comments posted) 1st December 2006
Very true, but I think that this special, elite language has some charm. Not because it has to do with classes and education, as well as with intelligence and effort. 
Shakespaere may not be an easy read when one starts, but eventually you'll get his style and read his works more easily. 
 
And indeed, it seems as if everyone writes nowadays. Some (like most people on this site) can, while others certainly can't. Who knows what will remain?

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 1st December 2006
Who cares? Horses for courses. Can't stand reading Shakespeare, love watching it. Can see what you mean about Hardy, but was bitterly disappointed to finish his last novel (all 99p classics read back to back), Austen a bore, Bronte (E) magnificent. - Not read any of the last four except Clarkson, who writes stuff particularly suited to aeroplanes and poolside - nothing much wrong with that. 
 
Crikey. Obviously thought provoking stuff. Well done. 
 
Phil.

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