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| 01 December 2006 | ||||||||||||||||||||
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Another not-quite-finished piece I'm afraid We stood, mittened hand in hand at the foot of the allotment. Waiting for explosions whilst Mum bustled to and fro from the car, tiptoeing between rows of leeks whilst balancing a thermos of tea and baked potatoes wrapped in foil. We ripped into them, burning fingers, lips and tongues; barely able to taste. Earlier that day we had helped to pile old furniture, fence panels and branches to make a throne for Guy Fawkes. Doused in paraffin, it explodes into light at the touch of a match. Crackling into the heavens as Guy burns, mounted on a chair leg. Across in the east a petrol bomb explodes; this time the whole street is consumed by the blaze. Children run from their houses. Parents follow, dragging what they can from the blaze. They have played this out too many times before. Another explosion and this time real flesh burns atop the bonfire. Unlucky this time. New screams echo into the night; terror, sorrow, tempered for some with relief that this time it is not their son, mother or lover who burns. It begins to rain, stealthily at first, but soon rivulets turn to torrents. We sulk as we squelch disconsolately towards the car in wellies, fireworks abandoned. They give thanks as the fire begins to gutter out. At least possessions, unlike faces, may be salvaged from the wreckage.
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