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Poetry
Memoirs
By maipenrai
08 June 2005

I was writing my memoirs

My Life

when my death occurred

the dark angels brought me

to this place of fallen angels

where I must stoke the fires of hell for

Eternity

 

And I cry

not from the infernal pain

of my burning flesh

but for my writings

lost to humanity forever

for amongst these burning souls

there is none to rescue me

 

Gabriel my old Archangel friend

is busy with that old whore Magdalena

and Saddam is soon to join me here

Adolph and Josef are playing wargames in

the darkest corner

and no one will speak to Pol Pot

except me of course

 

For now we are good friends

Pol and I

we often talk about new ideas

of genocide

but our plans for the future

are like the mist on the Somme

memories of slaughtered millions

Eternal

but not of this world

 

And I

I will be forgotten

 

 

Reviews
your best yet
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 10th June 2005
very dark 
i enjoyed it
Memoirs
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 10th June 2005
Thanks Kevin, I am pleased you enjoyed it

Written by maj (20 comments posted) 12th June 2005
 
:eek  
 
That is quite a strong piece.  
 
the idea of eternal condemnation and damnation really comes across. 
 
 
:)
thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 12th June 2005
Thanks Maj
Powerful
Written by LaughterLines (34 comments posted) 19th June 2005
A strong and powerful piece of poetry. I enjoyed the read. 
Excellent. 
 
LL
thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 20th June 2005
Thank You LL for your kind comments 
Bernie

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