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Poetry
Wind
By Talisker
03 December 2006
This airy piece was a breeze to write.  It's not a wind up.

Wind, the process by which air
moves from here, to there.
No more, no less, no fuss.
An air hole there, a gust,
and now it's filled, satisfied.
All that extra air cannot abide,
where it can find no space,
so hastens to another place.
To some this may come as a blow,
(Oh no! A pun!), those in the know,
who talk of pressure, high and low,
pin symbols to a board and go;
"this system is building,
and this one yielding"
Rubbish! Cast out the barometer!
Weather does not abide by letter,
of any law, but by it's own free will,
sometimes it moves, sometimes is still.
A weather forecast? Try a window.
Look out and see wind fast or slow,
then choose a fitting coat and hat,
based empirically on just that.


Oli 03/12/06

Reviews

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 3rd December 2006
I was a little disappointed to find this was about the weather. When I read 'Wind,' I thought this might be a little more gastric. 
 
Enjoyed nevertheless. I've never read a scientific poem before. 
 
All the best, 
 
Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 3rd December 2006
'Oh no! A pun!' indeed :) As for the intro...what were you thinking!!! Liked this very much, nice and light-hearted. 
 
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