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shelter comes in handy
By miss_castle
04 December 2006
Time passes smoothly in the morning
While you're smoking your cigarrettes
I wish nothing would destroy us
When the truth is all that's ever been said

"And in the middle of a storm", she said,
"shelter comes in handy"
in the waves of Hollywood
fame is offered like candy
to a child that's just begun explaining me
why I shouldn't need to run
anymore

Reason finds its secret causes
Cluttered inside this old empty closet
Where skeletons rest between a tie and suit
It is me they choose
when she is left behind

"And in the middle of a storm" she said
"shelter comes in handy"
in the waves of Hollywood
fame comes bitter,but dandy
as an elder that's come undone
at the possibility of not needing anyone

anymore

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Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 4th December 2006
I think something has gone wrong with the formatting on this. I'd rather not comment until it's sorted - as reading this as a chunk of text is difficult and any review would be unfair. 
 
Phil.

Written by miss_castle (7 comments posted) 5th December 2006
copying and pasting, duh, I forgot to read the warning against it...I'll fix this later :sigh

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