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| Through the glass | |
| By JourneyAtNight | ||||||||||||||
| 11 December 2006 | ||||||||||||||
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Another unfinished piece  A fading palm print, where he touched the window pane Distracting him from what is beyond For a whole four seconds. Thick lashes heavy with melancholy Framing eyes filled with wonder, with longing for the glee they behold. Skipping and Jumping and running Kicking balls about. Giggles and shouting and squeals Somersaults and Cartwheels. Beside him Are pieces of paper with crayon scribbles of houses, trees and aeroplanes. All the same. He hears them laugh again And for a moment He forgets Eyes widening with curiosity An eager smile appearing. But then he sees the glass again. And the smile fades, just like the palm print.
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Beautiful imagery... and for the rest, see above! 
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