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Poem of love
By Storywriter1987
11 December 2006
Hi guys this is one i had written for me and he has agreed that i can post it on here.

How can I tell you the way I feel,
whenever I’m with you my dreams they become real!
The way I hold you is all that I do
You are the one, I know that it’s you!
 

If I gave my heart to you,
I’d have none and you’d have two.
You are the one I long to be with,
The one I see my whole future with.
 

You are the one I dream about,
The one I can not live without!
I can not breathe without you,
I don’t ever want to be with out you!
 

I know you’re the one,
You’re the sun and the moon,
And you’re the – in my eyes,
the one and only dazzling sun!
 

I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU,
I love you I do.
All that you are and
everything that you do!

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Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 11th December 2006
Hey, lucky you. No one's ever written poetry for me. 
 
Hope it works out. 
 
Phil.

Written by Storywriter1987 (91 comments posted) 12th December 2006
Thanks Phil. 
 
The relationship with the 'man' that wrote this ended in May. But i asked his mate to ask him if i could use it. and he sent back that i could.  
 
I am not on talking terms with him for certain reasons i wont go into now. 
 
Glad you liked it though! 
 

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