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The Words You Can't Take Back
By Witzl
11 December 2006
Kid doggerel!  But as the mother of girls, I get weary of the constant back-biting and mean-spirited use of words to hurt others. Hence, this poem.

THE WORDS YOU CAN’T TAKE BACK

 

What’s sharper than a serpent’s tooth,

a needle, or a tack?

What’s sharper than the cruellest truth? –

The words you can’t take back.

 

You take your aim, you shoot them out

and see them penetrate

Whether you whisper, write, or shout

they’re out – now it’s too late

 

They say that truth will set you free

and so I’m sure it should

but sometimes – take a tip from me –

it doesn’t feel so good.

 

You get a tiny little buzz –

I told her what was what!

It disappears – it always does

And then look what you’ve got.

 

Take my advice and hang on to

those words that  pierce and smart

Or let them out – you’ll find that you

retain them in your heart.

 

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Omar strikes
Written by patterjack (1196 comments posted) 11th December 2006
My grandfather wrote in my autograph book the stanza of the Rubaiyat that begins The moving finger writes -- and it has stayed with me -- alas though , not preventing me from putting my foot in it far too often . 
 
I often wish I couldcancel half a line but ...... 
 
patterjack

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 12th December 2006
We had that one too! '. . . and having writ, moves on,' I seem to recall. My mother had a great collection of aphorisms and proverbs that told me what I needed to know in life. Did I pay them the least bit of mind, though? Not on your life.  
 
Now I find myself in the position of watching my kids do every stupid thing I ever did, unwittingly stepping into the same potholes and blithely ignoring my pithy sayings and helpful comments. Talk about poetic justice.

Written by Phil (6738 comments posted) 12th December 2006
I've come to the conclusion that my children can't learn from my mistakes, they can only be embarrassed by them. 
 
Enjoyed your poem. 
 
All the best, Phil.
All too true
Written by Josie (2796 comments posted) 29th December 2006
How very right you are,and, unfortunately, it is not only children who say these wicked things. What separates the men from the boys, and the women from the girls, is the strength to stand up and say: "I'm very sorry. I didn't mean what I said, and I didn't mean to hurt you." I haven't met anyone yet who has said that to me. I guess that at the other end, we must assume that they have been said and get on with life.

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