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Escape
By rilLie
12 December 2006
remember my song-poem, I Love You, Lord? My religion teacher told me to sing it in school. in front of the WHOLE batch. after our morning talk. on stage. in front of the WHOLE batch!!!! I don't wanna go to school no more! I don't wanna do that!!!!


I need to escape...

to escape from an unescapable doom.

to run away from darkness' bittersweet embrace...


I need to hide...

to hide from an all-seeing foe.

to sleep and think the storm was but a joke...


I need your prayers...

that tomorrow there will be heavy traffic...

that I'll be late for my scheduled perfomance!




I don't wanna go to school no more!

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Written by rilLie (324 comments posted) 12th December 2006
ekk.... i just noticed that jean.day just put up a poem with an almost-identical title.... :x stupid me.. :grin .. but I'm bettin' it's different.. i'm readin' it later...

Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 12th December 2006
Read Jean's then dig a tunnel! 
 
Bad luck rilLie - perhaps a sore throat... 
 
All the best, Phil.

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 12th December 2006
But still a nice poem. An original rhytm, but a rhytm nevertheless.

Written by rilLie (324 comments posted) 13th December 2006
ekkk.... there was ABSOLUTELY NO traffic this morning when I went to school....:upset :upset ... I got to school like an hour before the time we're supposed to.. 6:30.. I even went to the daily masses, as usual....... 
 
I did it, at least... Got it over with.... At least I didn't go off tune. :grin  
 
thanks, anyway. :grin

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