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The Cemetery of Forgotten Love
10 June 2005

                                   The Cemetery of Forgotten Love

                                   My soul is destroyed

                                   I have no heartbeat

                                   I cannot hear it.

                                   My heart stopped functioning today

                                   destroyed by no words or love from you.

                                   No recognition of the intensity of feelings we knew.

                                    All gone,

                                    wrecked by lifes cruel journey

                                    that seperated us from each other.

                                    What now?

                                    How will life go on?

                                    How cruel the world seems

                                    without the knowledge that you are still there,

                                     thinking of me,

                                     caring, loving and filling your dreams with thoughts of me

                                     as I have filled my dreams with thoughts of you.

                                     It is unbearable to think I cannot hope anymore,

                                     for the treasure that life could have held.

                                     All gone now.

                                     Your coldness has reached my heart

                                     left it's mark.

                                     My tears are for the loss of our dreams my love,

                                     dreams that were yours and mine.

                                     Gone to where dreams fade and die,

                                     in the cemetery of forgotten love.

                                     

 

 

Reviews
forgotton love
Written by sheppard (37 comments posted) 10th June 2005
Ladybird, this is strong and has inspired me to write a simular poem, it also makes me think of my work as I look after Graves for people who are unable to do so, I enjoyed reading it very much. 
Thanks :)
perfect
Written by kevinrobson73 (781 comments posted) 10th June 2005
respect where it's due 
you captured the emotion very well 
get's better each re-read
Cemetary of forgotten Love
Written by Ladybird ( comments posted) 11th June 2005
Thank you Sheppard I'm glad you enjoyed it. 
Kevinrobson73 - thankyou I'm glad you felt the emotion.

Written by maj ( comments posted) 11th June 2005
 
this is strong stuff. 
 
personally to me it sounds as if you were hurt quite bad. 
 
ah love is.... :sigh

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