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RUN AWAY
By lovewright
15 December 2006

run away

You think problem will end there when you run away


You think you can ignore the fact and left what you supposed to face?


You think you can cheat on life when you know you cannot hide.


You think you are doing a favor for everyone but truly, you are being so immature and selfish.


You cannot run away if you do not face the reality


Being a coward it does not make you success,


Scared of being in poverty but if you are the one who cause it for happening.


So where is the favor and peace of mind that you said?


Do you think you can handle life when you cannot even face the world without running away?


I wonder how you can sleep.





















- hlovewright

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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 15th December 2006
I'm guessing English is not your first language. If that's the case, then all credit for attempting poetry in a foreign language. 
 
Phil.

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