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| By rilLie | ||||||||||||
| 15 December 2006 | ||||||||||||
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the title was inspired by a line in my friend, Lui's religion song-project... the line was "No signs or warnings, just hushed/whispered (not sure) verses of what comes ahead." I love the line! -dance.-... anyway... the topic was inspired by my feelings (goes without saying, innit?).... I have this friend who migrated to Canada last Sunday... and we were a bit tight... He told me he'd call me by tuesday night... he never did..... the last line of the first stanza is a little like a line from my last poem... blame it on laziness. :D No word from you. No sign of life. Not even a whisper to bid me goodnight. No goodbye to patch us through. No sweet teasings nor smiles from you. All I hear in these dusty prisons of my mind, is the horrifying screams of silence, never ending -- you left. Not even hushed verses of how we've been, how you are, and what's to come. I'm afraid you'll forget let go of all the embers, and sing a new song, and turn your back on what's left of me. They say every song ends, but 'tis no reason to hate music. As even if I'll admit you've gone, I can never let you go.
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