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| The discovery of London | |
| By Fledermaus | ||||||||||||||||||
| 15 December 2006 | ||||||||||||||||||
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A silly bit of science fiction... Note: I heard that the genes responsible for blue eyes and ginger hair are recessive... Professor Zhang stroked his beard as he looked at the sandy pit. This was certainly the discovery of the century. At last they had found it. " Do you think what I am thinking?", he asked professor Kahn. The dark man nodded. " This could very well be the mythical city. Come, let me show you what we have found so far. There are some extraordinary things." Kahn guided Zhang to a small building a little aside from the site and showed him in. He pointed at a piece of coloured glass. " You know what I think that is?" " The window of some temple?" " Not just some temple. I think it's a part of Westminster Abbey!" " You're kidding me?" " No realy. This is the window that the great Churchill must have looked through when the German fleet appeared in the skies." Zhang leant forward and opened his mouth. " This is... Fascinating... Do you realy think that..." " 87% sure. We have found some other splinters, but they're still busy putting them together. But let me show you what else we've got." He walked to a table where numerous pieces of dirty and rusty metal were scattered. " This, dear collegue, is the railing of either the Millenium Bridge or the Tower Bridge." Zhang tapped one of the bars. " Let's not jump to conclusions. Where did you find these?" " At the bank of the river. They were probably washed away by the great flood of 2253, which destroyed the city. Our experts are 76% certain these were part of a bridge and they date them somewhere between 1700 and 2100." " It would be realy exciting if they were indeed from one of those bridges." "But now..." Kahn smiled mysteriously. " Now the highlight of this show. Follow me." They went to a dimly lit room. At one of the large tables there was something that was covered by a white sheet. Kahn turned on the light and pressed a finger against his lips. " Lo and behold." He pulled the cloth off the table and revealed the remains of a statue. Stone arms and legs were arranged around a torso. The head was damaged and the feet were missing, but still Zhang could make out that it represented a 19th century warlord. " Well?" " Splendid." " But what do you think this is?" " A statue of some general." " Not just some general, my dear Zhang, not just some general. This, dear collegue is Admiral Nelson!" " You mean the Nelson of Trafalgar?" " That's him." " No?" " Amazing." Zhang studied the remains carefully and touched them. " Is this the statue of the collumn?" " We think so. And you know what? We think it used to be painted in all kinds of strange colours, a red uniform, auburn hair, blue eyes. We are trying to reconstruct it." Zhang frowned. " That's nonsense. Do you realy believe such stories? You shouldn't confuse myth with history my dear Khan." " But they used to paint their statues, didn't they?" " Oh, no doubt about that. I won't be surprised if the statue on Nelson's collumn was brightly coloured, but I mean yellow hair and blue eyes. Do you realy believe that anyone could have had auburn hair and blue eyes? That's just a poetic way to say healthy hair and sparkling eyes. Give him black hair and brown eyes. He wasn't some sort of mythical creature." " Perhaps you're right." " Of course I am! Blue eyes... What a funny idea."
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