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Poetry

By JourneyAtNight

15 December 2006

Feeble attempts, but I quite enjoy writing them!

Fuchsia

Bashful and blushing,

Mrs Popple turns away (note: 'Mrs Popple' is another name for a Fuchsia)

From a teasing breeze.

Window frost

Embracing the glass,

Catching newborn sun rays,

Silver frost ferns gleam.

Sea side

Watch the sea frolic

Gently tickling sombre rocks,

Caressing the sand.

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Written by Fledermaus (3489 comments posted) 15th December 2006

They are very straight forward. Haikus often get so incredibly metaphorically it's hard to understand them, but these are very clear. I like them.

Written by Phil (6963 comments posted) 15th December 2006

Really liked the last. It has a real sense of fun about it. Perhaps not quite as simple as F thought.

All the best, Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1786 comments posted) 16th December 2006

Agree with Phil - I particularly like the last of these - has a lot of resonances for me. Great stuff

Elli

Written by JourneyAtNight (318 comments posted) 18th December 2006

Thanks everyone.

E

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