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By laya08
16 December 2006
I want freedom
to be free
released
and so on
But in that
You wont
Understand
With my wings
Pinned
to the four walls
I call
My room
...........
with
My blood
on the floor
and memories
Shattered
I want to be free
Released
and let go
But
YOU
........
PERSON
will never understand
what
I
.........
HUMAN
think of
Freedom

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Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 16th December 2006
I've come back to this a few times today. There's something about it I like, but I have to confess I don't quite get it. I feel I should. You know that feeling when you have a word on the tip of your tongue but it just won't come? That's what I'm like with this. Maybe it's me being dense. 
 
Phil.

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 16th December 2006
Liked some of the elements in this but not keen on the capitals - really put me off to be honest. 
 
Elli

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