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Neighbourhoodism
By Fledermaus
18 December 2006
Our neighbourhood has always been a wonderful multicultural society... But recently the local government caused the influx of disrupting factors.

In GTA San Andreas, you have to protect your 'homies' against gangs from the other 'hoods'. Whenever a purple guy enters a green neighboorhoud he gets riddled with bullets. The message is clear: Stay off our turf! No purple guys in the green 'hood'.
Now thank heaven I don't live in some American backstreet where the wrong clothes are a death warranty. But I can understand the sentiment...

My neighbourhood has always been a melting-pot and it has a rich history of residents. Centuries ago it was built on the rim of the ever expanding city. It must have been a posh suburb. Not as posh as the ones built on the better ground, but a quiet and stylish place, with broad avenues and quiet streets.
The rich must have attracted the middle class shop-owners and clerks and soon these made up the main portion of the population. I think that most of the older shops can be dated back to that age.
After the war, the people from the East-Indies came; friendly, educated men and women, who brought their own servants and maids. Most were of mixed blood and they gave the neighbourhood an unique atmosphere. I often imagine how they opened the doors to their gardens in the summer to feel the echo their lost homeland. Tempo doeloe... Tempo doeloe was gone and would never come back. Their memories are of such a sad beauty that it is no surprise that many books were written about their tragic history.
And soon others came. Offices arose along the highway and their employees settled down. People of all races, classes and religions joined in and formed a close and harmonious society. Even the poor, homeless illigal immigrants were OUR vagabonds.

But recently there has been an influx of people that do not fit in. It started with the decision of the local government to build a centre for psychological care. Of course crazy people have to go somewhere, but since they built that institute there seem to be too many weirdos in our streets, and they are not OUR madmen, but madmen from all over the town.

And it didn't stop there. The next intrusion was by a sex-shop and a video-store. Now no self-respecting local would be found dead in either of the two, but both attracted strangers of an unhealhy sort. They drive through our streets, their music so loud that the windows shake and they throw all sorts of dirt on the pavement.
Making noise and litter had always been the privilege of the visitors of the only Irish pub in our neighbourhood. Those were OUR noisy Irish, and they were very different from the pimp-like strangers that roam the streets nowadays.

Yet the worst was surprisingly, the foundation of a college in our neighbourhood. We always had a number of educational institutes in our neighbourhood, but they were small scale and they provided education for people who wanted to be nurses or cooks. Those were OUR students. They respected us and we respected them.
But this new college is a huge building with student homes in it. At first we all thought it was a very pretty building and the shop-owners thought it would be a boost for the local economy. But I whish they never built it.

Unlike the nurses and the cooks, these new students are like younger versions of the visitors of the sex-shop. They hang around in groups, obstruct the road and annoy people simply for the purpose of annoying them. And there are so many of them it seems like an invasion of foul mouthed scum.

I suspect that they come from neighbourhoods where things aren't as harmonious as ours used to be, neighbourhoods were people get robbed in the streets and where there are racial tensions. And now, with the collaboration of the local government, they try to export their problems to our neighbourhood...

I guess that for me the line is drawn. Political correctness is a nice thing and I am opposed to all forms of discrimination based on ethnicity, class, religion or sex, but... These lunatics, pimps and 'students' should go back to their own neighbourhood.

Just hopefully our city won't turn into San Andreas...

Reviews

Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 18th December 2006
And there goes many a middle aged socialist.  
 
I have to sympathise with you Fledermaus, I share similar feelings myself (different context and details, but in essence not a too dissimilar thought process) and I always feel a little guilty. Mind, not for being non-PC, but for not being 'right on.' I've thought about this quite a lot though. I think most people agree society is degenerating - do we accept it (because it's the PC thing to do) or challenge it? (because it's the right thing to do) 
 
On the other hand is this a case of NIMBY. 
 
Thought provoking piece. 
 
Phil.

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 18th December 2006
I know the type you mean - fireworks at 3 am, car "cruisin" and speeding down the quiet streets, travelling in packs while decorating the streets with their grog and spit and all the pointless riots they cause! 
I think every neighbourhood has them though, some more than others, but with variety comes volatility! 
 
Nice piece, I liked it. 
 
Best wishes 
 
E :)

Written by Clifftown (619 comments posted) 19th December 2006
Loved the territorial aspect of this piece... "they were OUR noisy Irish...." "OUR students..." I feel exactly the same way about the tourists who flock to my hometown every summer - doing just as much damage as the locals, but you almost don't mind as much when it's the people you know! 
 
Also liked the scene-setting at the beginning with the San Andreas comparison. Things won't get that bad...surely? :)  
 
Enjoyed this piece...

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 19th December 2006
Thanks Phil, JAN and Cliff. 
Phil: Indeed a case of NIMBY, but then, nothing wrong with that is there? In the end it's MY backyard ;) 
 
JourneyAtNight: That's exactly the kind of people I mean. Luckily they can't buy fireworks all year round. 
 
Clifftown: Indeed. somehow it's less annoying if one knows these people. But it also has to do with their general behaviour. Those pub-visitors used to get drunk at night and they shouted funny things at eachother, but in the daytime they were friendly and skilled workers. Those new 'visitors' on the other hand seem to be anti-social day and night...
Plus ça change ....
Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 19th December 2006
.............. it's sometimes disconcerting to realise that others (like yourself, Fledermaus) see THEIR district changing character just as rapidly as I see MINE change - and also deteriorating, as you point out! 
 
I spent a number of years away from Liverpool and only came back because I felt I had to look after my father as he grew older, but the town has changed so much I can't wait to move away again (Dad's decided to emigrate and live with my kid brother in New Zealand!) 
 
For many years Liverpool was a 'melting pot' of all sorts of different groups, but unfortunately it hasn't produced the "coffee coloured people by the score" which the pop song once suggested would be an ideal solution. All around me I see suspicion, hatred and distrust, not ALL of it race-oriented but intolerable nonetheless. 
If I win the Lottery this week I'm off, even if I leave without a definite job offer!

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 19th December 2006
Thanks Bagheera. 
I had moved away and returned to my old neighbourhood too, but when I first came back not much had changed and I thought I wanted to live here forever. But now that the place is changing so much I guess I'm not so sure anymore.

Written by Snodlander (501 comments posted) 19th December 2006
But hasn't always been so? We moved down to Ramsgate when I was a wee nipper. My parents were labeled Londoners, because they came from North Surrey. 
 
On his first day at work, my Dad was buttonholed by a workmate and told, "You're from London, aren't you. You think you know everything." 
 
"No, not at all" Dad was barely in his twenties, and he didn't want trouble on his first day. 
 
"Well, let me tell you something. You work all year to save up for your holidays, and in two weeks we take it all off you." 
 
We are always comfortable with the world we know, and begrudge changes, particularly from foreigners, i.e. people we didn't grow up with. And even some of them are a bit queer.

Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 19th December 2006
Yes, your back yard. I've been thinkng about this one today. I don't suppose anything stays the same. We become attached and emotionally tied and then we're let down. Perhaps it's all about getting older. - Or maybe the whole world is going to hell in hand cart. 
 
Phil.

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 19th December 2006
Thanks for your comments 
 
Snodlander: It's not so much because these guys are strangers, but because they are annoying strangers. New people come and go all the time, but they usually didn't alter the neighbourhood in a bad way. 
 
Phil: Thanks again. Perhaps you're right, but I think it's not just the perception that changed. But I guess that like those East-Indian people, I too long for some sort of tempo doeloe (If I got it correctly, that's Malay for 'good old days'. They usually use it to refer to the time they were in Indonesia).

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