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Act of a Superhero
By rilLie
19 December 2006
feeling angsty.

You ask too much of what I am,

never thinking of what I think,

never realizing simple thoughts

you should have done before.


Like broken wings that never mend,

you stay never changing.

Always asking, always taking,

of things nobody ever needs.


Like a black hole sucking in,

all energy from all life.

You take without stopping,

and never think.


You ask of me such great things,

I could never produce.

So large, and tiresome,

the act of a superhero.

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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 19th December 2006
Hi rilLie. Liked the first three verses and then lost it - sorry. Having said that, I'm not sure angst is something I relate well to - in fact anyone over the age of twenty-five might have difficulty. 
 
All the best, Phil.

Written by rilLie (327 comments posted) 20th December 2006
s'okay. these are just scribbles I was doing in my grandma's house.. waiting for my mum to get released from the hospital so.... just boredom-based. :grin

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 21st December 2006
Ok as far as angst goes...not your best but then I guess you know that!  
 
Elli

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