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A Progression of Humours
By patterjack
20 December 2006
After looking at the Elements a while ago , I thought to stay near to the medieval with a rough glance at the four humours.

A Progression of Humours

With my fine tuned sense of what's dramatic
and a flair for the broadly histrionic
from the time that I was but embryonic
you could not have described me as phlegmatic .

Cheerfully sanguine throughout my youth ,
I casually accepted what came my way
whether it was part of work or play.
I rarely bothered to seek a truth .

Predisposed by lines generic
to fight against authority's bounds
on all and every possible grounds
my middle years became choleric.

But the passing of years has slowed my frolic:
the old bones ache and the old joints creak
so that day by day and week by week
I find myself much more melancholic.

But where the humours are concerned
I have through all of them traversed,
laughed and wept and blessed and cursed,
and from them , have a little learned .

Reviews

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 20th December 2006
I've always loved those Victorian (and earlier, of course) references to the humors of the body. And this poem ended on a hopeful note, so after enjoying it, I felt cheered up.  
 
I like the lines 'Cheerfully sanguine throughout my youth / I casually accepted what came my way' -- this is really how it is, isn't it? We don't really stop to think about what we are receiving, and I suppose it would be strange for youth to understand and fully appreciate. A pleasant surprise, but strange. 
 
Though I think melancholy comes to us at all stages in our lives and, like Josie, hope for a friskier, lighter, more sanguine attitude in my own latter years . . . 
 
Clever poem.
Very "Humourous"
Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 20th December 2006
I never fail to learn something from your work Brian, and his is no different! I was vaguely aware of the humours, but you inspired me to a little research - fascinating! 
 
I note that through the years, other great thinkers have attempted to relabel.  
 
Humour Keirsey Berens 
Sanguine Artisan Improvisor  
Melancholia Guardian Stabilizer 
Choleric Idealist Catalyst 
Phlegmatic Rational Theorist 
 
Lovely little introspective piece using the traditional Greco-Roman model - very effective and interesting. 
 
Oli

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3351 comments posted) 20th December 2006
As Talisker said there is more to this than entertainment, although it was an entertaining and engagining piece. I was aware of humours and your use of them in a poem made me want to know more. 
And with regard to the thoughts expressed if you feel you have learned (even a little) then the journey through the humours has been productive and enriching. I think that too often we desperately try to avoid or move on from the sad and "melancholic" but they are part of us and if embraced and even savoured can tell us so much about ourselves...sorry going on again but that's what your stuff does to me. OK enough 
cheers 
J
HI Brian
Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 20th December 2006
I enjoyed this poem - and liked the format of the poem which I don't see all that often.  
 
And it was a learning experience for me too.

Written by JourneyAtNight (314 comments posted) 20th December 2006
I enjoyed this very much. Very clever.  
 
I ended up doing some reasearch too - interesting stuff. 
 
Best wishes, 
 

 
 
 
 

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 21st December 2006
Very medieval...I liked it. It's all been said already really - nice progression, clever bit of work and a good read. Goes well with the other piece too.  
 
Elli

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