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Yes, It's Christmas Once Again
By Josie
20 December 2006
Been there, done that and trying to change!  I remember the Christmases of the war years.  A day off work, if you were lucky.  A few nuts and an orange in your sock, and a home made toy or book.  Off to church to the Christmas services - - end of story!  If you had a chicken, you were lucky.  But we were all very happy with the simplicity of it all.



There’s another Christmas on its way –
    I’m losing count of  which -
By then my money will all be spent 
   I never will be rich.   
                  
Till then I'll bustle on my way -
   I've pies and cakes to bake,
 I'll send the cards and wrap the gifts
    and decorate the cake.

I'll clean the house and buy the food,
    I'll  push and shove in shops,  
The tree is bought, the lights come out, 
   The work - it never stops.

Candles are lit and carols sung
    There's Christmas music played,  
The children get excited and 
   My nerves are quickly frayed.

Queues in shops just grow and grow. 
    There's nowhere left to park,
The cold wind blows, rain comes down, 
    The days are short and dark

Let's  go to church and celebrate, 
   The coming of our King -
 Let's sing and pray and stop to think 
   Of  the many wondrous things.

So, stuff the bird and peel the sprouts
    and make the brandy sauce,
Hand out presents, wash the plates, 
   With not much time to pause.
 
The tele's going loud and clear, 
   And drinks are passed around,
Games come out, chocolate's scoffed, 
   Snoring starts to sound.

"Sit you down, and raise your glass -
    Let's drink a toast to Mum.
You do deserve a well-earned rest
   Come join us in the fun."

But when the day is over and
    The family’s been well-fed,
The tele's off, the lights go out,
   I'll wend my way to bed.


I'll sink into my bed, so tired - 
   Another Christmas gone,
There's only 12 months left to go
    Before another one.






copyright 2006
www.whiteheadm.co.uk


 

Reviews

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 20th December 2006
I liked this, Josie. You've captured the whole exhausting business very nicely. Bring on the oranges and nuts, I say, and I'll take my chances on going without the chicken. 
 
All day long I've been playing the game, wrapping presents, decorating, baking cookies. And sneaking little breaks at the computer whenever I can. Thanks to GW, I've had a much nicer pre-Christmas than I did last year. But my nerves are still frazzled.

Written by Fledermaus (3160 comments posted) 20th December 2006
And the sad thing is that people aren't exactly getting into a Christmassy mood because of all that stress. Somewhere halfway november (because of Saint Nicholas) it seemed that people in the streets got annoyed over the smallest things... And who can blame them? 
 
Everything has to be bigger, better, with more sparkling, shiny things, more food and bigger presents... It's interesting that you mention 'the Christmases of the war years', for I suddenly realized that Christmas 1944 must have been during the Dutch famine... How strange it must be for elderly people who experienced that to see how frustrated people nowadays get if they can't find a good recipe to prepare turkey while they would have been glad to have anything to eat at all... 
 
A nice poem, which clearly shows how much trouble Christmas seems to have become...

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 21st December 2006
Captures the stress of Christmas nicely Josie! It all detracts from the event rather. Liked this. 
 
Elli

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