|
| READING ROOM | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|
|
| COMMUNITY | |||
|---|---|---|---|
|
| ABOUT GREAT WRITING | ||
|---|---|---|
|
| WORK AWAITING REVIEW |
|---|
|
| GW IS... |
|---|
|
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas
and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur
authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry
Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you
can make new friends and improve your creative writing. |
| WHO'S ONLINE |
|---|
| We have 1183 guests online and 3 members online |
| print friendly version | |
| Desert Rain | |
| By Witzl | ||||||||||||||
| 20 December 2006 | ||||||||||||||
|
Not very Christmasy. But it's hot back in Southern California, and I might be getting a little homesick. DESERT RAIN
I used to love those rainy days Silky grey veils, all torn, the smell of stone Of earth made wet, the scorched sand dampened The sagebrush dripping, granite glistening Sweet relief to a thousand thirsty creatures.
For weeks and weeks, the world hard-baked Under the sun’s relentless, busy flame The summer ovens stoked forever, tirelessly by that same sun. Our feet, our throats, so parched, so dry – And then it came, that sweet, soft, quiet sound, a creeping, sizzling, rustling, nuzzling
So tentative, like insects shyly fluttering Like children stealthily devouring fruit And from the heated earth, a mist arose As soil received, absorbed the falling water As quickly over as begun.
Never a drenching, never quite enough The earth, still thirsty, craving more was left to dry and crack again; Our feet, our throats that welcomed moistened air soon coated once again with dust And in our hearts, deep longing for the rain of rains A soaking, quenching, cooling, gushing flood.
Only registered users can rate and write comments. Powered by AkoComment 2.0! |
||||||||||||||
|
|
Next item
|
|---|