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Appreciating Emily
By patterjack
21 December 2006
Dedicated to some very kind ladies as well as to Emily

Appreciating Emily.

It is difficult for a person such as I
To work his way into that spinster mind .
I've read your verse -- often with thoughts unkind
And unable to see through your particular eye .

Yet re-reading and re-reading I've come to see
that though you lived life as a near recluse
you saw quite clearly what others would refuse :
and any misunderstanding seems down to me .

What then , I ask myself , can I ever do
to help that narrow fellow in the grass
bring swiftly my own epiphany to pass
and see your world as clearly as do you ?

I am denied . You are hidden away too well.
Not just by your own choosing, though that's true
but by others' choices , those coming after you
concealing your vision, pre-empting what you tell .

Your alabaster vault won't open to the skies
though many have tried with an uncertain key:
those worlds still scoop their arcs above the likes of me,
indifferent to our stolidly earth drawn eyes .

Grant then your editors this one concession.
You , unknown to them , were before your time.
They did their best , but chained by restraints of rhyme
and older rhythms , denied you your own expression .

Reviews

Written by Thatllbemethen (83 comments posted) 21st December 2006
Usually I have a favourite verse. 
 
Not this time though, now I have a favourite poem. 
 
Relatively new here so will be checking out your portfolio over time. 
 
Thanks for this one. I'm inspired again 

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 21st December 2006
And I think Emily would have liked this too, Brian. I can't help but think she would be amazed at some of the interpretations of her work, too.  
 
Good, thoughtful poem.

Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 21st December 2006
Am I right in thinking your subject is Emily Dickinson?(reveals ignorance)  
 
Read this a few times and like it more on each occasion. 
 
Phil.

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3133 comments posted) 21st December 2006
I always find your work seductively accessible, I think I'm not going to understand it but the richness of the language keeps me reading and by the end I at least understand enough to reach my own conclusions. Poetry is still alien territory for me but I feel I have my visa stamped for your work 
Heady stuff indeed 
J

Written by ellipinnock (1753 comments posted) 21st December 2006
I am sure Emily would approve. You know what I think of this I'm not going to add anything more except to say that it grows on me every time I read it. 
 
Elli

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