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Computer Language
By Ladybird
11 June 2005

 

Computer Language

RAM  - is an animal with horns

CURSER - is someone who swears.

WEB - is a spiders, home of his own

CUT - is like something that tears.

VIEW - is a photograph, taken outdoors,

TABLE - is what goes with chairs.

PASTE - is a sandwich filler,

A MOUSE - chases you down the stairs.

WINDOWS - are something, you open for air

DRIVE  - is what you do in a car.

A FONT - is somewhere, a baby is named

LOG ON - is fuel,  for the fire.

OPEN - is something, you do with a letter

EDIT - a footballer ,does with the ball!

DOC - is someone, who makes you feel better

SAVE - is a goalkeepers, all!

PROGRAM - is something, you watch on T.V.

VIRUS - you can catch, it's alive

MEMORY - is something, often impaired.

A HARD DRIVE'S - on the M25 !

TOOLS - are of use, if you CRASH in your car

APPLICATIONS - you fill in all your life.

HELP - is advice from your best friend and mate

when you want to DELETE all your strife.

A new START - is that fresh beginning

when you FIND  a new partner and RUN

using TEXT, as the new communication,

You can CREATE your own SPACE and have fun!

 

Reviews

Written by maj (20 comments posted) 12th June 2005
 
 
love the ending :)  
 
good double use of the computer lingo! 
 
I got a positive feel towards the end of the poem.  
 
Personally i got the impression that you can look forward to the future and face new challenges with an open mind! 
 
 
 
;)
Nice play with words
Written by oxy (28 comments posted) 13th June 2005
Loved this line, 
"EDIT - a footballer ,does with the ball!"
Perspective
Written by Norby (8 comments posted) 13th June 2005
A lot of originality; looking at computer lingo that we take as took now, and viewing it from a different angle. As maj said it does blossom into a feel good, positive finale and seems to pick up speed towards the end as well. Loved it :)
Computer Language
Written by Ladybird (32 comments posted) 14th June 2005
Thank you maj - oxy and Norby for your encouragement. 
Ladybird ;)

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