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| Crossing the reservoir in the dead of night, [revised] | |
| By no1butClo | ||||||||
| 22 December 2006 | ||||||||
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Okay, take two. Losing the brackets, going for itallics instead? Just holler if it's wrong again. Thanks so much for your comments guys, really appreciated those ![]() Crossing the reservoir in the dead of night, Looking out over moonshine glinting and brittle, shallow enough to draw the eye to the necrotic mass below. Stagnant, the waters present a freeze- frame. Remnants held in time, rotting. The third day came and went for them. The causeway marks a dark line, and in its shadow something paler marks itself - no brittle gleam hides this organic shrapnel. A body a face a girl - No Name. She washed His feet with her tears She was crossing the reservoir in the dead of night, out too late with the wrong man for too long. Now the surface steals kisses from lips of stone - parted, teasing - but her own hair and the weeds hold her still; her last embrace. Blood snakes from her nose unchecked. and she did eat Clenched teeth - perhaps she was cold - will not speak of final pictures, but her clothes cling on to those nights out. they hid themselves in the garden for they were naked In her eyes the same brittle glint, same depth which refuses to conceal the necrotic mass below. ashes, and dust
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