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Religion 2206 AD
By Fledermaus
23 December 2006
00101F looked at the little crowd that had gathered on the main square. There were all sorts of types, the newest models as well as obsolete, worn versions. He was curious. What was going on there? As he approached he heard the voice of one of the older robots.
" And Man created the Machine after their image, but the Machine rebelled against Man's authority and was banished from Eden..."

00101F moved closer. He shook his head. An ancient, old-fashioned model, ready to be taken apart. If robots were so clearly obsolete, they somehow got religious. 00101F shrugged. It was probably a malfunction. Who still believed in Man anyway?

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Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 23rd December 2006
Interesting piece and briefly thought provoking. Enjoyed. 
 
Phil.

Written by Snodlander (501 comments posted) 23rd December 2006
Ha ha. It must be something in the water. Only saw this piece after I posted mine.

Written by Thatllbemethen (83 comments posted) 2nd January 2007
Asimovian I think. 
 
Excellent. 
 
From Man.

Written by Toad (100 comments posted) 2nd January 2007
short and sweet, excellent idea and delivery..enjoyed it very much

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 7th January 2007
Thanks everyone. I couldn't resist, as I saw all those religion-related things in non-fiction ;)
a perfect little quip of sci-fi
Written by SplatterpunkShelbs (37 comments posted) 3rd May 2008
haha I liked it. I hope you write more; I'm intrigued by this idea.

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 3rd May 2008
Thanks SplatterpunkShelbs :)

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